My Poems

Not expecting people to like them completely, just thought I would share some of my poems



Broken

A life built, a life broken
A heart built, a heart broken
When its all gone where will this leave me?
No heart, no life, just an empty shell
I cant let this happen to me.
No, i wont let this happen to me
I need to keep my sanity and my personality
I need to keep me.



I wish... (Draft Copy)

I wish Life could be all Beautiful
But what if the beauty was fake?
Would that be living a lie? would that be living a dream?
Who really says what beauty is?
Every Teardrop we cry lets a rainbow shine out
Come to think of it... Life is beautiful



What is Beauty? (Draft Copy!)

Someone once Asked me, what is beauty...

Beauty is every new life that is born
Every Breath that we take
Every Tear we cry
Every choice we make
Every Person we Love
Beauty is all around us, but most people are blind to it.

They then asked me... Am I beautiful?

As long as your yourself, then yes you are.



Poem for Susie (Draft Copy) (first attempt at a Rhyming poem, and romantic poem, Susie is the girl who suggested I started writing again not my girlfriend xD)

When you speak to me I blush
My Heart goes into a rush

When you kiss me im going to cry
When I say im never going to leave its not a lie.

Talking to you makes my legs to turn to goo
I never want to lose you

I think its brave of you to post them, they are fairly good . You might wish to re read some of them as they have small errors, including lots of capital letters in the wrong places.

Good on you though for writing them.

hence why they are draft copies ^_^ I just sat there and jotted down ideas, stuck them together and there ya go ^_^ took about a minute to write each one (I do it in my spare time sometimes)

Thanks for the feedback and I will update it with the final versions and new poems in the future

Perhaps don't share draft copies then

well if I share the draft, I can modify it depending on the comments I get

Thats fair enough then, keep up the good work

Thoughtful